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不要说北方没有诗人
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PostPosted: 2013-10-01 09:29:25    Post subject: 不要说北方没有诗人 Reply with quote
不要说北方没有诗人
大兴安岭/天风
玄鸟鸣叫上古传送的天籁
与北国森林中达斡尔猎人鹿笛曲合奏
共同演绎萨满神鼓敲击出的旋律
诞生一群把文字摆弄成田垄的粗狂野人

树叶间涂满松脂油腻腻的刺鼻气味
圈圈点点鬼画弧般玷污纯洁白纸
笑容在无懈可击的空档传播
再埋进攥一把都流油的黑土地下

日复一日地盼望钻石堆满房屋一样盼望着
不看米缸屈指可数的五谷杂粮
不问水桶里污浊变质即将腐烂的困水
头颅仰望永不改变的白天太阳和夜晚星月

语言在这里沉积为黄沙中日渐泛光的纤纤薄片
词句闪烁成美女大胆传送醉倒英雄儿男的碧绿秋波
成活的在肥沃土地和油脂养分堆积下还是要成活
小草发芽鲜花绽放就会伴有蝶飞蜂舞的春情
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PostPosted: 2013-10-01 15:58:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
语言在这里沉积为黄沙中日渐泛光的纤纤薄片
词句闪烁成美女大胆传送醉倒英雄儿男的碧绿秋波
成活的在肥沃土地和油脂养分堆积下还是要成活
小草发芽鲜花绽放就会伴有蝶飞蜂舞的春情
学习，顶上 问好朋友. 国庆快乐！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-01 16:59:09    Post subject: Reply with quote
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语言在这里沉积为黄沙中日渐泛光的纤纤薄片
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天风谢谢朋友的阅读支持！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-01 17:32:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
关于北国森林中达斡尔猎人，可不可写实？
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PostPosted: 2013-10-01 18:21:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
回环的节奏，力量、激昂。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-02 07:33:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
钱晓强 wrote:
关于北国森林中达斡尔猎人，可不可写实？


我们需要张扬少数民族文化
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PostPosted: 2013-10-02 07:35:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
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回环的节奏，力量、激昂。


天风多谢远狼的喜欢和支持！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-02 09:56:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
诗歌语言有特色，祝节日快乐！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-02 16:52:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
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诗歌语言有特色，祝节日快乐！


多贴褒奖和赞扬！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-06 20:44:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
想起了年轻时候的感觉，问好~！！！！！！！！！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-08 07:05:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
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想起了年轻时候的感觉，问好~！！！！！！！！！


天风问好！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-08 10:36:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
“攥一把都流油的黑土地”上，自然是诗意无限的。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-14 23:02:48    Post subject: Reply with quote
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“攥一把都流油的黑土地”上，自然是诗意无限的。


天风非常感谢一无秀才阅读支持和青睐！
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