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海棠说与我（外一首）

白水
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Posted: 2013-09-30 21:12:32 Post subject: 海棠说与我（外一首）

海棠说与我你浴雪的情愫打开九月最后一个周末秋，就要深了雾凝露重小松鼠忙着囤积越冬的果实呱噪的雁群也开始南飞你依然淡泊霜白也罢，枫红也罢，或许明日草黄你含笑不语，看世间炎凉百态看三十年河东翻手为云，三十年河西覆手为雨云雨中你不语含笑笑天下事了亦未了，何不以不了了之枫林云梦云在天上，天在水里，水在画中我在画中寻你，你却悄然入梦幻梦中几朵悠悠的云儿忽而西，忽而东

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-10-01 08:22:01 Post subject:

海棠说与我 ——题目本身就有意思。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-10-01 16:01:01 Post subject:

有意境,有感觉，欣赏，学习，问好. 国庆快乐！ _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

白水
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Posted: 2013-10-02 01:09:11 Post subject:

谢谢两位朋友的鼓励.传两张周末照的照片.一张是我种在家门口的海棠,不温不火的从五月开到现在还挺美,看来与淡泊情怀有关.喜欢另一张是在一个离我家不远的公园照的,那儿曲径通幽, 宁静如梦.

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2013-10-02 09:58:26 Post subject:

轻盈若云的诗风，问候白水，祝国庆佳节快乐！ _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

戀海
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Posted: 2013-10-02 14:32:40 Post subject:

詩短情長喜歡問好

山城子
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Posted: 2013-10-02 16:11:00 Post subject:

图文并茂！！问好白水！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

白水
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Posted: 2013-10-03 08:47:42 Post subject:

问好吟啸徐行，戀海，山城子老师，谢谢你们的鼓励。

一无
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Posted: 2013-10-03 09:28:24 Post subject:

“笑天下事了亦未了，何不以不了了之 ”，所以能“自落自开还自香”。欣赏！ _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

冰清
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Posted: 2013-10-04 02:21:30 Post subject:

妙笔写精思！读来，让我记起“诗文自须学力，然用笔构思，全凭天分。”（袁枚《随园诗话》）。当然，人若尘务经心，天分终将有限。——所以，我在欣赏白水好诗作的时候，也总忘不了她那份“淡淡然”！

白水
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Posted: 2013-10-05 10:07:50 Post subject:

问好一无,冰清,谢谢你们的鼓励. 周末愉快

远狼
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Posted: 2013-10-05 23:48:11 Post subject:

淡雅、宁静。 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

白水
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Posted: 2013-10-06 08:53:56 Post subject:

谢谢远狼，问好周末

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