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想想未来

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Posted: 2013-09-03 07:39:18 Post subject: 想想未来

想想未来周道模有人给未来抹上美好的唾沫有人给未来安上玫瑰的窗帘让我想想未来，在这白发钻出的夜晚让我想想未来，在这秋虫围困的小镇那位相信未来的诗人被他的未来剥夺了清醒那些不相信未来的人正在疯狂挥霍自己的生命我的未来可能有美女来访我的未来肯定是疾病缠身我可能踩着诗歌的芦苇渡江而去我肯定吊着信念的稻草泅渡命运未来梦想开花未来也可能毁灭于战争未来理想结果未来也可能坍塌于地震我的未来父亲早已演示有脚不能出户，心跳停时大脑还清醒趁我还能行走，就走遍神州漫游地球趁我还在心跳，就心跳出血热的诗句趁我还能飞翔，就飞越大洲大洋和苦难趁我还在写作，就写出人类的梦想和呻吟在这皱纹爬上时间的夜晚在这汉字做梦的川西古镇我用笔把未来推得很远很远我的心把现在抱得很紧很紧 2013-8-10晚9：20 于连山 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2013-09-04 07:56:30 Post subject:

诠释的很好诗意的问来 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2013-09-04 08:50:51 Post subject:

“我用笔把未来推得很远很远 ” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-09-04 10:12:27 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

诠释的很好诗意的问来

谢谢水弦的读赏和鼓励！秋天好！
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Posted: 2013-09-06 16:39:25 Post subject:

我的未来可能有美女来访我的未来肯定是疾病缠身我可能踩着诗歌的芦苇渡江而去我肯定吊着信念的稻草泅渡命运此四句足矣。 _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

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Posted: 2013-09-06 21:57:48 Post subject:

学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

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Posted: 2013-09-07 10:22:47 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“我用笔把未来推得很远很远 ”

谢谢一无君的读引！秋光好！
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Posted: 2013-09-08 09:44:37 Post subject: 对于某些诗歌，评论它都是在自述其拙。所以我就不回复了，

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Posted: 2013-09-09 05:44:38 Post subject:

钱晓强 wrote:

我的未来可能有美女来访
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谢谢老钱的读引！删掉其它句？ Laughing

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Posted: 2013-09-14 06:05:24 Post subject:

chenrunmin wrote:

学习，顶上问好朋友.

谢谢陈君顶上的鼓励！下降的是夕阳。 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-09-14 11:24:38 Post subject:

那些相信未来的诗人被他的未来剥达清醒那些不相信未来的人正在疯狂挥霍自己的生命 _________________ 墙漏风了

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Posted: 2013-09-16 21:58:21 Post subject:

scf1133 wrote:

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Posted: 2013-09-25 08:13:36 Post subject:

风墙 wrote:

那些相信未来的诗人
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谢谢读引！那位——食指诗人也。
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