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想想未来
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PostPosted: 2013-09-03 07:39:18    Post subject: 想想未来 Reply with quote

想想未来

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有人给未来抹上美好的唾沫
有人给未来安上玫瑰的窗帘
让我想想未来,在这白发钻出的夜晚
让我想想未来,在这秋虫围困的小镇
那位相信未来的诗人
被他的未来剥夺了清醒
那些不相信未来的人
正在疯狂挥霍自己的生命
我的未来可能有美女来访
我的未来肯定是疾病缠身
我可能踩着诗歌的芦苇渡江而去
我肯定吊着信念的稻草泅渡命运
未来梦想开花未来也可能毁灭于战争
未来理想结果未来也可能坍塌于地震
我的未来父亲早已演示
有脚不能出户,心跳停时大脑还清醒
趁我还能行走,就走遍神州漫游地球
趁我还在心跳,就心跳出血热的诗句
趁我还能飞翔,就飞越大洲大洋和苦难
趁我还在写作,就写出人类的梦想和呻吟
在这皱纹爬上时间的夜晚
在这汉字做梦的川西古镇
我用笔把未来推得很远很远
我的心把现在抱得很紧很紧

2013-8-10晚9:20 于连山
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PostPosted: 2013-09-04 07:56:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

诠释的很好 诗意的问来
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PostPosted: 2013-09-04 08:50:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

“我用笔把未来推得很远很远 ”
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PostPosted: 2013-09-04 10:12:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

水弦 wrote:
诠释的很好 诗意的问来



谢谢水弦的读赏和鼓励!秋天好!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-06 16:39:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

我的未来可能有美女来访
我的未来肯定是疾病缠身
我可能踩着诗歌的芦苇渡江而去
我肯定吊着信念的稻草泅渡命运
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PostPosted: 2013-09-06 21:57:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习,顶上 问好朋友.
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PostPosted: 2013-09-07 10:22:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

一无 wrote:
“我用笔把未来推得很远很远 ”


谢谢一无君的读引!秋光好!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-08 09:44:37    Post subject: 对于某些诗歌,评论它都是在自述其拙。所以我就不回复了, Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2013-09-09 05:44:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

钱晓强 wrote:
我的未来可能有美女来访
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谢谢老钱的读引!删掉其它句? Laughing
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PostPosted: 2013-09-14 06:05:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
学习,顶上 问好朋友.



谢谢陈君顶上的鼓励!下降的是夕阳。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2013-09-14 11:24:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

那些相信未来的诗人
被他的未来剥达清醒
那些不相信未来的人
正在疯狂挥霍自己的生命
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PostPosted: 2013-09-16 21:58:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

scf1133 wrote:
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PostPosted: 2013-09-25 08:13:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

风墙 wrote:
那些相信未来的诗人
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谢谢读引!那位——食指诗人也。
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