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《活着的伤》外一首

子花
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Posted: 2007-04-27 04:44:31 Post subject: 《活着的伤》外一首

《活着的伤》湿漉漉盘吸在七寸身体一圈圈移至伤口一具柴骨驮着一只巨大的牛虻谁又能说不像人血馒头当然这不是在说诗歌《赤脚上街》一次次把脚裸露企图接触大地寻找泥土的灵魂一层层落叶那仰望着枝头和白云竟无处归依促足十个趾头看着落叶和冗长的大街皮鞋清洁工和扫帚沙沙沙沙沙沙的声音比秋风利索

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Posted: 2007-04-27 06:10:46 Post subject:

促足十个趾头看着落叶和冗长的大街皮鞋清洁工和扫帚思

子花
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Posted: 2007-04-28 20:49:01 Post subject:

多批评指教！！学习中！

韩玉光
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Posted: 2007-04-28 21:36:30 Post subject:

比秋风利索。 _________________ 山西诗人

金金
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Posted: 2007-04-29 20:30:44 Post subject:

走得很远，但只是走 ——路需要走走想想。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

子花
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Posted: 2007-04-30 04:12:39 Post subject:

感谢两位诗人阅读！！问候！

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Posted: 2007-04-30 04:51:38 Post subject:

诗意内敛,朦胧诗歌,要细心读.欣赏 _________________ 杨光的语言空间 http://blog.sina.com.cn/languagespace

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