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秋天已经来临

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Posted: 2008-01-07 20:27:29 Post subject: 秋天已经来临

秋天已经来临一我没喝喝醉醉了的是山村的黄昏那些秋叶步履踉跄从季节的枝头飘摇而下什么叫落叶归根是不是一个人喝多了酒跌荡在泥土里不再醒来而枝条这双岁月的手放飞了满眼的绿色的心情和日子里的小鸟空荡荡伸向空中在展示什么还是在抓获什么是不是秋风醉了把满地枯黄吹起来问枝头是否再次收留二我还没有准备好却不能说出拒绝院子里刚落下两片椿叶谁在上面写满了不惑在原始森林慨叹过挺拔和苍劲在清江河畔感悟了不息与奔流谁用一盏明月替我斟满故土的苞谷酒让过去的脚印和记忆醉眼迷蒙我还没有准备好我还没能来得及学会深沉凝练蝉声就覆盖了曾经的风雨霜雪这时候可能需要淡定重新整装出发对于未来脸上的沟壑及沧桑不足以填满它的辽阔和深远 _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-01-07 21:19:58 Post subject:

把满地枯黄吹起来问枝头是否再次收留对落叶归根的诠释也很有趣。问好。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-01-08 02:17:54 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

把满地枯黄吹起来
问枝头是否再次收留

对落叶归根的诠释也很有趣。问好。

谢谢nobody。遥祝新年好！
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:22:48 Post subject:

意趣别致的一首！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:29:28 Post subject:

我没喝喝醉很形象~ 文字都醉了问好

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Posted: 2008-01-11 04:03:42 Post subject:

用逗號會比空格效果好。白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））21 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2010-09-02 06:49:48 Post subject:

又是一地秋叶落！ _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2010-09-02 07:31:34 Post subject:

北方真好~四季分明~~我这儿常常春天大把大把的落叶子~~秋天倒棵棵长得安稳的很~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2013-09-11 21:11:24 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

北方真好~四季分明~~我这儿常常春天大把大把的落叶子~~秋天倒棵棵长得安稳的很~~

又是秋意浓！！
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