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Posted: 2013-08-28 10:04:29 Post subject: 酷暑

酷暑 ──── 今夏沪上竟然有四十多个高温天文 / 一无你要走了我还活着空空的怎么突然留恋起连绵的热浪难道我的热情不足以温暖众人就像火柴余烬快要从她的小手滑落 2013-08-31上午修改 2013-08-29 上午狮吼岭荧屏前 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-08-28 10:14:30 Post subject:

欣赏小诗！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-08-28 10:17:54 Post subject:

今夏竟然四十多个高温天。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-08-28 10:19:11 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

欣赏小诗！！

谢谢山城子朋友！
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———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-09-22 07:28:48 Post subject:

很有质感的小诗，喜欢

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Posted: 2013-09-25 09:39:23 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

很有质感的小诗，喜欢

谢谢 "白水 Moonlight" ！
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———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-09-25 12:23:00 Post subject:

又意趣欣赏 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2013-09-26 09:14:11 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

又意趣欣赏

谢谢水弦赐读！
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———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-09-27 01:24:39 Post subject:

只我，才依恋这绵绵长长的秋痕读诗友的诗弄得我也诗兴大发了，作个巜十月光》遣遣兴。呵呵呵何需绿叶相伴呵我舞动落叶亲吻十月花不算美丽的身影众人只期待春而我懂得这季节凉凉薄薄的爱情轻声，轻声轻些声听，飞雁们谈些什么她们说听见了十月花哀哀的泣声 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-09-27 01:27:32 Post subject:

读诗友的诗弄得我也诗兴大发了，作个巜十月花》遣遣兴。呵呵呵只我，才依恋这绵绵长长的秋痕何需绿叶相伴呵我舞动落叶亲吻十月花不算美丽的身影众人只期待春而我懂得这季节凉凉薄薄的爱情轻声，轻声轻些声听，飞雁们谈些什么她们说听见了十月花哀哀的泣声 _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-09-27 09:08:27 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

读诗友的诗弄得我也诗兴大发了，作个巜十月花》遣遣兴。呵呵呵
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刚去读过《十月花》。欣赏！
诗坛如酒海，跳进来了，岂能不尽情于醉。远握！
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———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-09-27 09:08:44 Post subject:

回重复啦，不会删除。抱歉。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-09-28 21:11:41 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

远狼 wrote:

读诗友的诗弄得我也诗兴大发了，作个巜十月花》遣遣兴。呵呵呵
...

刚去读过《十月花》。欣赏！
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好个诗坛如酒，干杯！
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诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。
管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。
http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-09-28 21:13:54 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

回重复啦，不会删除。抱歉。

是我那段重复了。是在手机上操作不当造成的。我也没办法删除，只有管理员才行吧！
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诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。
管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。
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Posted: 2013-09-29 10:22:17 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

一无 wrote:

回重复啦，不会删除。抱歉。

是我那段重复了。是在手机上操作不当造成的。我也没办法删除，只有管理员才行吧！

可能就是这样设置的.
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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