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秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-23 08:01:07 Post subject: 岛主东来诗气芸

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qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-07-23 08:17:40 Post subject:

秋叶兄大忙人,迟至今日才将大作汇集出来供大家欣赏.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-07-23 09:12:15 Post subject:

秋叶巧对嵌名联，天衣无缝，欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2013-07-23 11:25:24 Post subject:

哇！秋叶兄终于出手了，且一出手便不凡，上乘之作。高兴之余，和上一首作续尾：芝兰斗室众芸芸，诗如潮水歌如云。美景良辰不虚此，异国难得几回闻。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-24 14:18:24 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶兄大忙人,迟至今日才将大作汇集出来供大家欣赏.

庆宏兄，革命莫分先后，友情不会过时啊 Laughing

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-24 14:23:25 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

秋叶巧对嵌名联，天衣无缝，欣赏！

谢谢黄老师赏读，嵌名联，是多戴一副脚镣起舞，更易摔倒啊。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-24 14:29:57 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

哇！秋叶兄终于出手了，且一出手便不凡，上乘之作。高兴之余，和上一首作续尾：
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芝兰斗室众芸芸，诗如潮水歌如云。
美景良辰不虚此，异国难得几回闻。

谢谢晓松兄次韵和作，大作把当时情景写活了，青出于泥啊 Very Happy

晓松
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Posted: 2013-07-24 19:55:26 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

秋叶巧对嵌名联，天衣无缝，欣赏！

谢谢黄老师赏读，嵌名联，是多戴一副脚镣起舞，更易摔倒啊。

秋叶兄治学严谨，可敬可嘉。不过，我常常把它作为一种娱乐，觉得好玩，不求严谨，下面是我的“大作”，包含了15个聚会的朋友：

黄洋界边，听云涛风动拂晓鸣，苍松伟拔似高岸远去；
和平岛上，看白水川沙若冰清，万木秋叶迎野航归来。
横批：庆宏挂帅

嘿嘿，你以质著称，咱以量取胜！ Laughing

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-24 23:02:05 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

黄洋界 wrote:

秋叶巧对嵌名联，天衣无缝，欣赏！

谢谢黄老师赏读，嵌名联，是多戴一副脚镣起舞，更易摔倒啊。

晓松兄，你太有才了，大作几乎囊括了我们参加的诗友们，而且格律和含义都近乎完美，只是晓松兄忘我精神可嘉，韩信点兵，应该把“苍松”需改为“晓松”就更完美了 Laughing

黄洋界边，听云涛风动拂晓鸣，晓松伟拔似高岸远去；
和平岛上，看白水川沙若冰清，万木秋叶迎野航归来。

晓松
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Posted: 2013-07-25 10:37:10 Post subject:

秋叶兄，已经有晓鸣了，再加“晓”就重了，有松就行。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-25 21:49:54 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

秋叶兄，已经有晓鸣了，再加“晓”就重了，有松就行。 Laughing

晓松兄, 你也太严格要求了，对联不忌重字啊 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-07-26 02:36:45 Post subject:

有趣的嵌名

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Posted: 2013-07-30 06:58:20 Post subject:

真才实学，有意嵌名联韵美，友谊情怀，虚心求教众仙来。向大家学习，致敬！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-30 20:34:26 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

有趣的嵌名

都有你份啊，白水兄

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-30 20:40:15 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

真才实学，有意嵌名联韵美，
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真才实学，有意嵌名联韵美，
友谊情怀，虚心求教众仙来。

谢谢笑聊兄，大作“美”字可再推敲。

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Posted: 2013-07-31 06:21:29 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

真才实学，有意嵌名联韵美，
...

秋叶兄指正的是，美字不当，适用“巧”字。

真才实学，有意嵌名联韵巧，
友谊情怀，虚心求教众仙来。

冷雨
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Posted: 2013-07-31 19:49:34 Post subject:

问好秋叶老师！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-31 22:35:26 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

秋叶 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

真才实学，有意嵌名联韵美，
...

秋叶兄指正的是，美字不当，适用“巧”字。
...

笑聊兄，可能是我没有说清楚，我指的是词性不对，特别是关键的部位，供参考。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-31 22:38:50 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好秋叶老师！

谢谢，也向你请安！

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-08-01 13:37:20 Post subject:

真才实学，有意嵌名联韵出，厚意深情，虚心化蝶入诗来。秋叶兄，本是随意写来赞赏君等，如今“被逼”，只得循规矩而行。我的短处被秋叶兄无情地“揭露”出来了！

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