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阿喀琉斯告别裙装
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PostPosted: 2013-07-27 19:31:22    Post subject: 阿喀琉斯告别裙装 Reply with quote

阿喀琉斯告别裙装
文/殷晓媛

他撕去皮肤上香料的痕迹,撕去
属于塘鹅的娇小翅膀,撕去刻着自己名字的
空坟茔之上,绵延千里的死叶
和粉饰的月光。梦中曾如殓衣般随着雨声

覆盖他的羊皮卷,有特洛伊地图的纹理
和鹅蛋壳的薄弱。现在他从大地深处
伸出洁净优雅、宛似石膏的双手,将它撕裂为二。
竖琴声悲凉。当他裹一身希腊白
日夜兼程,扬起尘埃的身后,土壤深处
他策动过的橄榄花的冷火焰,冲破青烟袅袅的山峦
与海岸,一路奔向他将托付荣耀的

命运的深渊。多年前,当他在女孩群中间
隐藏自己的面容与未来。那时她们曾看见
一只巨大的豹纹蝶,飞过花坪上空
撞向西方的落日。它拖着的修长影子
在她们中间奔跑,像一条找不到入海口
而愤怒的河流。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-27 22:20:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

看了一些後, 有感.
在台灣, 我是反鼓勵這樣的文字的, 文字超現(很簡單)不如文字不超現而內涵超現(難度不可測).
這樣多的帖子, 單調的形式產生閱讀疲乏.
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(在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美)
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PostPosted: 2013-07-27 22:28:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
看了一些後, 有感.
...
呵呵,问好,有见地。
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