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点睛

姚阳辉
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Posted: 2013-07-14 16:30:37 Post subject: 点睛

铺开心思，画一幅锦绣江山在最动情处画一美人属最古典的那种我画下美人的秀发、脸庞和红唇握一管短笛，着一袭落地长裙再画一帘东南风，让秀发和长裙更加灵动只是迟迟不愿画上眼睛我怕她看穿我并不伟岸的灵魂直到那天，某个眼神让我彻夜失眠让我方寸大乱我很不情愿地提起画笔点下眼睛。突然美人的眼珠兀自转动了几下，顺着眼角滚下两行热泪

山城子
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Posted: 2013-07-17 15:35:41 Post subject:

美人的眼珠兀自转动了几下，顺着眼角滚下两行热泪 ——一首诗无疑当有点睛之笔！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

姚阳辉
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Posted: 2013-07-18 16:04:06 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

美人的眼珠兀自转动了几下，顺着眼角
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谢谢点评！问好！

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