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你是岭上一树梅
梅之灵
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PostPosted: 2013-07-10 11:00:25    Post subject: 你是岭上一树梅 Reply with quote

你是山间峭岭上

突兀自生的一树梅

当皑皑的白雪覆盖了大地

你迎着寒风张开了笑脸

当冰霜压上了你的枝头

你挺着胸脯擦亮了双眼

当我伫立在你的脚下仰望

你散发出缕缕清香幽然暗淡

你长在最陡的崖壁

你生在最冷的季节

你把曲折的枝干

伸向茫茫无际的青天

你让血红色的花瓣

现出最美丽的容颜

你是冰天雪地里

傲寒怒放的一树梅

这罕见的精灵

这世间少有的奇花

你把青春的韶光

交付给了一片洁白的冬天

你把独领寒风的美

毫无保留的洒在了天地间

你把孤芳自赏的身影

永久的印在了我的心间

你是坚毅的化身

你是不曲的灵魂

你是茫茫雪地里独立的美神

你是——

山岭上的一树梅
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PostPosted: 2013-07-11 06:41:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

散文笔法,硬伤
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PostPosted: 2013-07-12 09:43:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

你是坚毅的化身
你是不曲的灵魂

品读,问候!
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