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PostPosted: 2013-06-28 06:26:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师好诗

如果改宽宽为款款, 是不是合适
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PostPosted: 2013-06-28 08:50:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

对不起,老眼昏花,敲错了字,已改正。谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2013-06-29 11:45:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

吾家小女已陶陶
三年茁壮成佳木

很相应啊
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PostPosted: 2013-06-30 00:28:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢寒水兄赏阅。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-03 11:37:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄兄蔷薇花更红,争芳斗艳一丛丛。花好心情好,黄兄多保重。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-03 14:10:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候黄老!命题不敢,要黄老您乐一下!

题白水蔷薇照

白水池边花斗艳 千娇百媚竞相开
白雪公主翩翩至 红粉佳人款款来


临屏依韵和黄老:

蔷薇朵朵池边绽,惊艳芬芳四溢来。
疑是谁家红粉立,凝眸细看乃花开。

此诗已经老师改过,故按改过的和上。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-03 19:41:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

这里也有这么多花啊。。欣赏唱和。。问好黄先生。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-05 12:37:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候黄老!绝句转句无所谓粘联,向你致歉!前边回复贴里已修改。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-06 01:25:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

笑聊兄不必客气,这样的探讨很正常。谢谢你!
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PostPosted: 2013-07-13 19:42:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候黄老!
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PostPosted: 2013-07-13 22:40:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢冷雨!
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PostPosted: 2013-07-18 21:23:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

初到,详看,真是图文并茂,赞
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PostPosted: 2013-07-19 10:57:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

欢迎新朋友光临!
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PostPosted: 2013-07-23 07:12:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

粉着蜂鬚舒嫩蕊 光凝蝶翅展红袍

黄老师,此联甚妙,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2013-07-23 09:04:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢秋叶赏阅!
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