hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2013-06-28 06:26:01 Post subject: |
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黄老师好诗
如果改宽宽为款款, 是不是合适 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-28 08:50:44 Post subject: |
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对不起,老眼昏花,敲错了字,已改正。谢谢! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-29 11:45:26 Post subject: |
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吾家小女已陶陶
三年茁壮成佳木
很相应啊 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-30 00:28:22 Post subject: |
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谢寒水兄赏阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2013-07-03 11:37:22 Post subject: |
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黄兄蔷薇花更红,争芳斗艳一丛丛。花好心情好,黄兄多保重。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-03 14:10:14 Post subject: |
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问候黄老!命题不敢,要黄老您乐一下!
题白水蔷薇照
白水池边花斗艳 千娇百媚竞相开
白雪公主翩翩至 红粉佳人款款来
临屏依韵和黄老:
蔷薇朵朵池边绽,惊艳芬芳四溢来。
疑是谁家红粉立,凝眸细看乃花开。
此诗已经老师改过,故按改过的和上。 |
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SLIU 秀才
Joined: 01 Jan 2010 Posts: 384
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Posted: 2013-07-03 19:41:15 Post subject: |
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这里也有这么多花啊。。欣赏唱和。。问好黄先生。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-05 12:37:19 Post subject: |
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问候黄老!绝句转句无所谓粘联,向你致歉!前边回复贴里已修改。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-06 01:25:08 Post subject: |
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笑聊兄不必客气,这样的探讨很正常。谢谢你! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
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Posted: 2013-07-13 19:42:52 Post subject: |
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问候黄老! |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-13 22:40:09 Post subject: |
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谢谢冷雨! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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淇兰舒 童生
Joined: 18 Jul 2013 Posts: 15
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Posted: 2013-07-18 21:23:31 Post subject: |
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初到,详看,真是图文并茂,赞 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-19 10:57:19 Post subject: |
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欢迎新朋友光临! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-07-23 07:12:50 Post subject: |
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粉着蜂鬚舒嫩蕊 光凝蝶翅展红袍
黄老师,此联甚妙,学习了。 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2013-07-23 09:04:42 Post subject: |
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谢谢秋叶赏阅! _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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