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hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-06-28 06:26:01 Post subject:

黄老师好诗如果改宽宽为款款, 是不是合适 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-06-28 08:50:44 Post subject:

对不起，老眼昏花，敲错了字，已改正。谢谢！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2013-06-29 11:45:26 Post subject:

吾家小女已陶陶三年茁壮成佳木很相应啊 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-06-30 00:28:22 Post subject:

谢寒水兄赏阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

晓松
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Posted: 2013-07-03 11:37:22 Post subject:

黄兄蔷薇花更红，争芳斗艳一丛丛。花好心情好，黄兄多保重。

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-07-03 14:10:14 Post subject:

问候黄老！命题不敢，要黄老您乐一下！题白水蔷薇照白水池边花斗艳千娇百媚竞相开白雪公主翩翩至红粉佳人款款来临屏依韵和黄老：蔷薇朵朵池边绽，惊艳芬芳四溢来。疑是谁家红粉立，凝眸细看乃花开。此诗已经老师改过，故按改过的和上。

SLIU
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Posted: 2013-07-03 19:41:15 Post subject:

这里也有这么多花啊。。欣赏唱和。。问好黄先生。

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-07-05 12:37:19 Post subject:

问候黄老！绝句转句无所谓粘联，向你致歉！前边回复贴里已修改。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-07-06 01:25:08 Post subject:

笑聊兄不必客气，这样的探讨很正常。谢谢你！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冷雨
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Posted: 2013-07-13 19:42:52 Post subject:

问候黄老！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-07-13 22:40:09 Post subject:

谢谢冷雨！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

淇兰舒
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Posted: 2013-07-18 21:23:31 Post subject:

初到，详看，真是图文并茂，赞

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Posted: 2013-07-19 10:57:19 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友光临！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-07-23 07:12:50 Post subject:

粉着蜂鬚舒嫩蕊光凝蝶翅展红袍黄老师，此联甚妙，学习了。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-07-23 09:04:42 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶赏阅！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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