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白水
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Posted: 2013-07-01 22:35:05 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

李杜揮毫你举杯 - 好句，欣赏！
花艳诗美！

谢谢老师鼓励，恭候老师墨宝。昨日急着出门，未及回完帖，待会抽空看能否发两张昨天照片上来，与老师共享节日快乐。

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Posted: 2013-07-01 22:40:59 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

响应白水兄的提议，既然热闹就热闹几天，信马由缰了，就选第4号：

低首娇羞露粉腮，侬家心事倩谁猜？
只期如意郎君至，携手临风一起开。
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晓松才思敏捷，加油，继续。献花（4号）

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-01 22:48:20 Post subject:

SLIU wrote:

好美的花，忍不住凑两句。。

七绝

谁家庭院沐朝晖
细细枝头竟芳菲
更有露灵添异彩
引来骚客素毫挥
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好一句“引来骚客素毫挥”，献上如花之笔，继续。问好46 Very Happy

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Posted: 2013-07-02 06:59:25 Post subject:

七绝《友情》长夜难眠凝烛泪？低吟浅叹醉三更清风不拭潇潇雨，唯愿陪君待日升我就临屏依韵和这首：艳丽可人娇欲滴，款款身步惹投情。平常碧玉怎能比，本出名门倾国城。

白水
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Posted: 2013-07-02 10:40:19 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

七绝《友情》
长夜难眠凝烛泪？低吟浅叹醉三更
清风不拭潇潇雨，唯愿陪君待日升

我就临屏依韵和这首：

艳丽可人娇欲滴，款款身步惹投情。
平常碧玉怎能比，本出名门倾国城。
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笑聊好文笔，你看这朵可否？开的时候虽没倾城，把花圃小倾了一下 Very Happy

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Posted: 2013-07-02 19:05:05 Post subject:

太谢谢了！白水兄帮我配上画，成为绝唱了！（我这是跟白水学的自吹）

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Posted: 2013-07-02 19:41:43 Post subject:

多谢 BS ！好，再继续一个，就一楼那个吧，没标签的，，佳人篱畔露桃腮几瓣合拥几瓣开红粉心扉花底卧为谁羞涩费疑猜

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Posted: 2013-07-02 21:47:36 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

太谢谢了！白水兄帮我配上画，成为绝唱了！（我这是跟白水学的自吹） Very Happy

哈，终于又有敢吹的了（其实你不算吹了），第二轮题诗轮你当判官。本来嘛，你是版主，该你判才是 Very Happy

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Posted: 2013-07-02 21:49:26 Post subject:

SLIU wrote:

多谢 BS ！好，再继续一个，就一楼那个吧，没标签的，，

佳人篱畔露桃腮
几瓣合拥几瓣开
红粉心扉花底卧
为谁羞涩费疑猜

谢谢题诗，很美，继续 Smile

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Posted: 2013-07-02 21:55:21 Post subject:

七绝《蔷薇*诗雪》素羽冰肌映碧波，红尘莞尔笑蹉跎不吟月下戚戚语，击水清流雪作歌 9

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Posted: 2013-07-03 07:59:45 Post subject:

谢谢BS鼓励！呵呵，还要评判呢？好，判官先生，先民主后集中如何？民主建议：诗评：和平岛 --白马脱缰晓松-- 婉约动人笑聊 -- 倾城绝唱（根据“自吹”）白水 -- 清流玉雪降温七月（不用空调了） SLIU -- 至于我的嘛，，以数量取胜民主投票结果：众仙各有千秋，并列状元榜！请判官定夺

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Posted: 2013-07-03 14:20:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

太谢谢了！白水兄帮我配上画，成为绝唱了！（我这是跟白水学的自吹） Very Happy

哈，终于又有敢吹的了（其实你不算吹了），第二轮题诗轮你当判官。本来嘛，你是版主，该你判才是 Very Happy

判官还是白水兄您来当，我们摇旗呐喊助兴足矣。

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Posted: 2013-07-03 17:58:14 Post subject:

46判的挺好。原本就是一乐，大家高兴就好

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Posted: 2013-07-03 18:15:22 Post subject:

七绝庭院春色姹紫嫣红庭院栽，鲜花绿叶映窗台。谁说春色留不住？白水香茶等友来。

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Posted: 2013-07-03 18:16:39 Post subject:

七绝《蔷薇*诗馨》杏脸桃腮匿翠微，心音一瓣绕梁徊。粉唇轻启珠玑落，皓齿留香咏刺玫。 7

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Posted: 2013-07-03 18:20:07 Post subject:

我道今天刚早起，谁知更有早起人！

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Posted: 2013-07-03 18:23:16 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

姹紫嫣红庭院载，鲜花绿叶映窗台。
谁说春色留不住？白水香茶等友来。

是这张对吧？咱们一起恭候笑聊大驾光临Toronto:D

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Posted: 2013-07-03 18:32:49 Post subject:

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我道今天刚早起，谁知更有早起人！ Very Happy

星辰明月悄悄落，旭日东升喚诗魂 Very Happy

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Posted: 2013-07-03 18:54:24 Post subject:

春色分明热闹来，千姿百态竞相开。芬芳四溢香风到，只为甘霖摆玉台。* 注：白水兄早已泡好香茶在玉台等候大家，庆宏兄先品尝，我是闻到茶香赶过去凑热闹。谢谢白水兄以及师友们！我已预订签证。九月初应该成行没问题。

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Posted: 2013-07-04 07:17:12 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

春色分明热闹来，千姿百态竞相开。
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希望笑聊兄签证顺利。

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