半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-04-21 09:22:23 Post subject: 与佛对视 |
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与佛对视
佛的身边
围着许多信徒
跪拜
祷告
我没下跪
佛用揉左眼的右手
朝我轻弹
不动声色地
佛的那枚砂子
嵌入眼中
佛的痛成了我
一生的痛
2007-4-22 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-21 19:48:46 Post subject: |
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真有些禅意呢  |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-04-21 20:03:05 Post subject: |
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呵呵,问好月光妹妹~  |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-04-26 03:46:03 Post subject: |
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问好诗歌朋友~握!  |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-04-26 03:51:57 Post subject: |
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金金 wrote: |
好,喜欢滴说  |
看到你诗歌后有你的名字,打开的时候竟然有点害怕,祈祷了一下,还好,你喜欢~不过别人也提了第一段太写实,最后一段又没有给人留下空间,以我目前的水平,我还不知道该如何开个好的头,和将诗歌提升,真难啊~希望大家多赐教~问好金金! |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-04-26 04:25:56 Post subject: |
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阿依琼裙 wrote: |
最近接触的朋友都对佛家有一定的悟,我喜欢你这首诗中蕴含的深深的禅意.
境由心生! |
喜欢结识和佛有缘的朋友,这是我在灵隐寺参拜时的一点感受,感谢你能喜欢,握! |
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阿依琼裙 秀才

Joined: 09 Apr 2007 Posts: 920 Location: 废墟之上 阿依琼裙Collection |
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kli 秀才
Joined: 30 Mar 2007 Posts: 193 Location: LONDON kliCollection |
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kli 秀才
Joined: 30 Mar 2007 Posts: 193 Location: LONDON kliCollection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-04-28 16:23:32 Post subject: |
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kli wrote: |
拈花微笑一摩诃迦叶
悟是另一种芬芳
那时
佛祖拈着花
众皆默然
群山肃立
我轻颤一下
闻到我破颜 |
欣赏,比我写得有味道,学习了~  |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-05-01 09:07:44 Post subject: |
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感谢金金提读~节日好!  |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2007-05-01 09:19:53 Post subject: |
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很绝妙的诗歌
 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-05-01 11:57:44 Post subject: |
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hepingdao wrote: |
很绝妙的诗歌
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谢岛主夸赞~节日好!  |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-03 04:23:15 Post subject: |
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佛的痛成了我
一生的痛 .................有回味。 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2007-05-03 05:53:10 Post subject: |
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赵福治 wrote: |
佛的痛成了我
一生的痛 .................有回味。 |
问好大诗人~  |
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