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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 09:22:23    Post subject: 与佛对视 Reply with quote

与佛对视

佛的身边
围着许多信徒
跪拜
祷告

我没下跪
佛用揉左眼的右手
朝我轻弹
不动声色地
佛的那枚砂子
嵌入眼中

佛的痛成了我
一生的痛

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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 19:48:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

真有些禅意呢 Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-04-21 20:03:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,问好月光妹妹~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 22:12:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

心中有即有
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 02:14:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

好,喜欢滴说 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 03:46:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
心中有即有

问好诗歌朋友~握! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 03:51:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
好,喜欢滴说 Laughing

看到你诗歌后有你的名字,打开的时候竟然有点害怕,祈祷了一下,还好,你喜欢~不过别人也提了第一段太写实,最后一段又没有给人留下空间,以我目前的水平,我还不知道该如何开个好的头,和将诗歌提升,真难啊~希望大家多赐教~问好金金!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 03:52:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

最近接触的朋友都对佛家有一定的悟,我喜欢你这首诗中蕴含的深深的禅意.

境由心生!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 04:25:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿依琼裙 wrote:
最近接触的朋友都对佛家有一定的悟,我喜欢你这首诗中蕴含的深深的禅意.

境由心生!

喜欢结识和佛有缘的朋友,这是我在灵隐寺参拜时的一点感受,感谢你能喜欢,握!
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PostPosted: 2007-04-26 04:35:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

引用:我没下跪


这句有很深的隐喻
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PostPosted: 2007-04-28 12:00:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

佛的痛?
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PostPosted: 2007-04-28 12:01:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

拈花微笑一摩诃迦叶
悟是另一种芬芳
那时

佛祖拈着花
众皆默然
群山肃立

我轻颤一下
闻到我破颜
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PostPosted: 2007-04-28 16:23:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

kli wrote:
拈花微笑一摩诃迦叶
悟是另一种芬芳
那时

佛祖拈着花
众皆默然
群山肃立

我轻颤一下
闻到我破颜


欣赏,比我写得有味道,学习了~ Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 21:00:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2007-04-29 21:00:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

提!!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-01 09:07:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

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提!!

感谢金金提读~节日好! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-01 09:19:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

很绝妙的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-05-01 11:57:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

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很绝妙的诗歌
Very Happy

谢岛主夸赞~节日好! Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 04:23:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

佛的痛成了我
一生的痛 .................有回味。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 05:53:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
佛的痛成了我
一生的痛 .................有回味。


问好大诗人~ Very Happy
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