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[原创]黑月亮(外二首)
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 19:41:06    Post subject: [原创]黑月亮(外二首) Reply with quote

黑月亮


月亮 可以不被太阳看见
挂在树上 那时黑夜最长
你可以画一枝梅 画两枝也行

这不是想象
好多次 我就闻到梅的香味
像这些年的心境

我不敢再想 在月下寻找
牛的 羊的 以及那原野上的云朵的眼神
被一根鞭子狠狠地抽打




那遥远


那遥远 风一吹 她就动两动
好像僵死的花香鸟语 魂魄在天空徘徊

你说 生命脆弱
大风吹来 世界无边

我终于没有忍住
就像一根不愿倒下的草儿
影子 踩上了马蹄的疼



天空 


房子里的房子
锁子锁着锁子

夜晚
光着屁股 爬上树的孩子 缘木求鱼
大自然为他点灯

如果 大人来了
许多看不见的东西 就把他们埋葬



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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 21:26:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

做了很大的空间
有些暗示
但没有达到必然的结果
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 23:31:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

影子 踩上了马蹄的疼

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