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漁家傲 - 美景清晨

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白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-25 06:00:30 Post subject: 漁家傲 - 美景清晨

綠楊婆娑环屋抱，前庭后院縈芳草，簇簇花丛香繚繞。無喧噪，洁净怡人林陰道。酣梦醒來风景妙，窗前明丽霞光照，树上娇娆莺歌調。早上好！招呼声里朝阳笑。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-25 06:20:49 Post subject:

一觉醒來，精神爽，抬眼望，一片美景良晨，你看：一排婆娑的綠楊环屋拥抱，屋前后院片片柔嫩的芳草，簇簇的花丛正花开烂漫，隨着晨风送來叠叠幽香，幽静的清晨，无喧噪，街道林陰清爽，洁净宜人。明丽的霞光窗前照，娇娆的莺歌调從树上娓娓传來。早上好！在問好声中朝阳展现灿烂的笑容！真是一幅美妙的晨光画图！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-06-25 07:13:18 Post subject:

人间仙境，使人向往！境由心生，其实美好的东西时时刻刻都会出现在你的眼前，看你能否发现与发掘。白云老师就善于发现与发掘。值得我们好好学习！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-25 09:11:54 Post subject:

謝笑聊赏評！宜人清景，润泽詞筆。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-06-25 09:41:12 Post subject:

人间仙境,世外桃源.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-06-25 10:04:24 Post subject:

北美胜景，感同身受。欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-26 11:09:42 Post subject:

謝謝庆宏！真是仙境般美景！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-26 11:13:41 Post subject:

謝謝黄兄！黄兄说得好，北美胜景。这乃是大家注重环保，爱护大自然的收获。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-06-26 21:18:20 Post subject:

白云老师说得对，这是保护大自然的回报。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-26 23:52:31 Post subject:

笑聊，保护大自然乃关系人类世世代代的大事啊 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-06-27 05:56:47 Post subject:

白云老师说的是呀！可惜这么浅显的道理，在国内高居庙堂的食肉者中，居然还想不到。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-27 06:20:09 Post subject:

笑聊那么未来人类就要面对很多大自然的問题了。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-27 06:33:00 Post subject:

老师啊，国内是积重难返啊！现在是把子孙后代的财富都掠夺一空。已到了需要当代的鲁迅来高呼“救救孩子”了的时候。现在的国内，平常看不到蓝天白云，同《波拿巴-雾月十八》中描写的天气一样。不是说国内风景不如国外，而是环境出了问题。是那些拿了纳税人的钱不干事的人（甚至干坏事的人）做的孽。

白云闲人
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Posted: 2013-06-28 00:02:53 Post subject:

〝平常看不到蓝天白云〞 - 啊！那就更加要保护大自然了。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-28 09:17:03 Post subject:

“招呼声里朝阳笑 ” 声情景并茂。欣赏。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-28 22:30:16 Post subject:

早上好！招呼声里朝阳笑。此处风光无限好 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2013-06-29 05:58:01 Post subject:

謝謝一无欣赏！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-29 06:04:01 Post subject:

謝謝岛主賞評！是啊，綠荫环抱、縈绕花草、蓝天彩霞、阳光灿烂 - 大自然风光无限好！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-07-01 22:38:26 Post subject:

good morning 欣赏诗境的超脱怡然

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Posted: 2013-07-02 05:44:54 Post subject:

謝謝白水！景致清幽洁净、精神舒畅怡然。 _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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