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【满江红】 北萨斯喀彻温河NORTH SASKATCHEWAN RIVER
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 04:28:19    Post subject: 【满江红】 北萨斯喀彻温河NORTH SASKATCHEWAN RIVER Reply with quote

【满江红】 北萨斯喀彻温河NORTH SASKATCHEWAN RIVER

眼望蓝天,
阳春到、滋生润物。
摸两岸、铁桥横跨,
群楼高矗。
绿水浅清残雪送,
白云深遂轻鸥去。
大地新、霜月晓风吹,
惊仙鹭。

佳城跃,
乡和睦;
飞鹅到,
迎松鼠。
一条轻轨路、万人相处。
山雀树中欢畅跳,
信鸽河里蹁跹舞。
北江波、历刺骨寒冬,
谁能数。

满江红 双调九十三字,前段八句四仄韵,后段十句五仄韵 

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【平仄韵注】词林正韵,○平●仄,◎应仄可平,⊙应平可仄。
April 8, 2013 Hormish Garden of Edmonton (南河书院)
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 09:22:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

走千山万水,洒一路诗情。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 09:41:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情楓园翩跹舞!
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PostPosted: 2013-06-23 21:01:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

连兄久不来了,一来就有佳作。有指点江山的韵味。欣赏!
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