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【浪淘沙】爱民顿即景EDMONTON JOURNAL
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 04:25:24    Post subject: 【浪淘沙】爱民顿即景EDMONTON JOURNAL Reply with quote

【浪淘沙】爱民顿即景EDMONTON JOURNAL


霞晚彩云娇,
数里香飘,
星星流水静悄悄。
春雨如油浇大地,
不怕山高。

夜暮等公交,
铁路残桥,
千家万户度良宵。
灯火满城沿两岸,
富丽丰饶。

May 15, 2013 Hormish Garden of Edmonton (南河书院)
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 04:37:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

夜暮等公交,

很生活化
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 09:16:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

听说那里的公交还有待改进。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-22 09:45:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

即景飘香、富丽丰饶 - 好詞!欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2013-06-23 21:02:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

即景入词,非高手不能。
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