连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-22 04:25:24 Post subject: 【浪淘沙】爱民顿即景EDMONTON JOURNAL |
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【浪淘沙】爱民顿即景EDMONTON JOURNAL
霞晚彩云娇,
数里香飘,
星星流水静悄悄。
春雨如油浇大地,
不怕山高。
夜暮等公交,
铁路残桥,
千家万户度良宵。
灯火满城沿两岸,
富丽丰饶。
May 15, 2013 Hormish Garden of Edmonton (南河书院) _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2013-06-22 04:37:48 Post subject: |
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夜暮等公交,
很生活化 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-06-22 09:16:49 Post subject: |
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听说那里的公交还有待改进。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2013-06-22 09:45:15 Post subject: |
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即景飘香、富丽丰饶 - 好詞!欣赏! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-06-23 21:02:58 Post subject: |
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即景入词,非高手不能。 |
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