连南河
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Joined: 30 Aug 2008
Posts: 342
Location: Toronto
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【浪淘沙】爱民顿即景EDMONTON JOURNAL
霞晚彩云娇，
数里香飘，
星星流水静悄悄。
春雨如油浇大地，
不怕山高。
夜暮等公交，
铁路残桥，
千家万户度良宵。
灯火满城沿两岸，
富丽丰饶。
May 15, 2013 Hormish Garden of Edmonton （南河书院）
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hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
Posts: 8106
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| Posted: 2013-06-22 04:37:48 Post subject: |
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夜暮等公交，
很生活化
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2013-06-22 09:16:49 Post subject: |
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| 听说那里的公交还有待改进。 |
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2013-06-22 09:45:15 Post subject: |
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即景飘香、富丽丰饶 - 好詞！欣赏！
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2013-06-23 21:02:58 Post subject: |
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| 即景入词，非高手不能。 |
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