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闲中好－春深

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-25 18:14:12 Post subject: 闲中好－春深

湖明镜，碧柳新妆影。信步春渐逝，飞绵又怜景。听弦应，宁静如溪映。笑问谁会意？微吟动佳兴。注释：【闲中好】三仄一平，压仄韵、单调。我又加了一调。 ○○▲，●●○○▲。●●○●△，○○●○▲。 ○○▲，●●○○▲。●●○●△，○○●○▲。

博弈
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Posted: 2007-04-25 19:08:02 Post subject:

方上新妆，又疑春远，寻春不驻，何处、何处？枝，宙宇，听吟诉，手指空疏，碧绿已濯足。凑趣湖州 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

莹雪
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Posted: 2007-04-25 22:40:03 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

方上新妆，又疑春远，寻春不驻，何处、何处？
枝，宙宇，听吟诉，手指空疏，碧绿已濯足。

凑趣湖州

呵呵，满新鲜的。

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