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弄花香满衣
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 12:09:24    Post subject: 弄花香满衣 Reply with quote

弄花香满衣

我是一只顽皮的小精灵
在世界的花丛中

当我携着满身的香
回归时
天使们齐声说
我们也要去
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 12:21:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

天使们齐声说
我们也要去
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 15:21:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

很可爱。儿童诗的味道。 Smile
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PostPosted: 2007-04-25 23:51:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗名的意境很好.诗的表达稍嫌简单和平淡.

个人意见,班门弄斧,不好意思.
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