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五绝·《村夜》

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Posted: 2013-06-15 09:45:33 Post subject: 五绝·《村夜》

（一）乌啼落尽晖，瘦月入云肥。绿柳和风睡，劳人踏露归。（二）月隐绿梢头，花眠夜入秋。清风无睡意，缓叩小重楼。（三）狗吠夜无题，萤飞草落低。潺流追月影，一路到村西。（四）玉镜凭空照，顽星戏柳妆。山村无暗夜，不染世间凉。 _________________ 拈文字之花，抒汉子之情!拈生活之花，流心底之意! 博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/2756396533

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Posted: 2013-06-15 10:14:42 Post subject:

诗中不少提炼得很有韵致的句子：“瘦月入云肥”，“劳人踏露归”，“潺流追月影,一路到村西”。这一组诗生动地描写出村夜的特色。欣赏！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2013-06-15 10:42:02 Post subject:

一组不错的五绝。欣赏！

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Posted: 2013-06-15 15:40:39 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

诗中不少提炼得很有韵致的句子：“瘦月入云肥”，“劳人踏
...

问好诗友文安
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Posted: 2013-06-15 15:41:02 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

一组不错的五绝。欣赏！

谢谢诗友欣赏遥握
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Posted: 2013-06-15 20:37:41 Post subject:

确实不错的一组绝句。学习。

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Posted: 2013-06-16 00:20:58 Post subject:

〝清风无睡意，缓叩小重楼。〞、〝潺流追月影，一路到村西。〞 - 欣赏！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-16 09:06:56 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

确实不错的一组绝句。学习。

谢谢诗友欣赏问好
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Posted: 2013-06-16 09:07:21 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

〝清风无睡意，缓叩小重楼。〞、〝潺流追月影，一路到村西。〞 - 欣赏！

问好白云闲人遥握
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