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【忆王孙 祭战友】
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PostPosted: 2013-06-05 16:42:13    Post subject: 【忆王孙 祭战友】 Reply with quote
【忆王孙 祭战友】
文/良子/辽宁



夜莺哭泣雨纷纷，
花落延河泪湿巾。
悲戾难还壮士魂。
祭冯君，
盖世英雄照万坤。

【良子】2013.6.6午


冯延河：延安籍，一等功臣，原139师417团英雄四连

1987.1.7黑豹行动队员，因肝癌于2013年6月4日不幸去世。




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PostPosted: 2013-06-06 09:03:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
一曲忆王孙，战友情谊深。
“泪”疑错敲为“戾”。“壮士魂”换“壮士身”，如何？
最后一句换作“一代英雄盖世勳”。供参考。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-06 09:08:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢老师雅赏点评，辛苦了，向你学习，祝福端午节快乐！！！ Smile
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PostPosted: 2013-06-08 23:29:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
祭英雄，谊長情深！
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PostPosted: 2013-06-13 22:51:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢老师雅赏点评，辛苦了，向你学习，祝福端午节快乐！！！
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