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[原创]　慰楚风

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Posted: 2007-04-24 10:35:17 Post subject: [原创]　慰楚风

. 　慰楚风 . 　　　 kokho 一树承枝舞千叶枫痴岂会随风去听雨谁见月影斜晨雾浓尽露烁煦。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-25 01:40:20 Post subject:

枫痴岂会随风去听雨谁见月影斜..............好意境.

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Posted: 2007-04-25 08:21:32 Post subject:

谢谢　福治兄弟　；）。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-25 09:41:09 Post subject:

"枫痴岂会随风去" 喜欢这句。好像看到一片飘落又被雨水打湿的枫叶粘在树干上。想起了美国作家 O Henry 写的《最后一片树叶》。 "晨雾浓尽露烁煦 " Kokho 的一些表达总让我觉得很异域。It's just me. _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

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Posted: 2007-04-25 09:58:45 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

"枫痴岂会随风去"

喜欢这句。好像看到一片飘落又被雨水打湿的枫叶粘在树干上。
想起了美国作家 O Henry 写的《最后一片树叶》。

"晨雾浓尽露烁煦 "

Kokho 的一些表达总让我觉得很异域。It's just me. Smile

谢谢品读　

－　那露珠闪烁这黎明的煦光　。。

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Posted: 2007-04-25 10:06:04 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

Lake wrote:

谢谢品读　

－　那露珠闪烁这黎明的煦光　。。

。

谢谢。懂了--闪烁着日出时的霞光
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Posted: 2007-04-26 08:41:17 Post subject:

。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-26 18:42:56 Post subject:

此诗好在意境幽深。 _________________ 诗坛驰驱，我行我素！ http://blog.sina.com.cn/gongziguo

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Posted: 2007-04-26 19:59:55 Post subject: Re: [原创]　慰楚风

kokho wrote:

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　慰楚风
. 　　　 kokho

一树承枝舞千叶
枫痴岂会随风去
听雨谁见月影斜
晨雾浓尽露烁煦

。

吾兄的诗别具一格，风格独特，喜欢！

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Posted: 2007-04-26 20:54:30 Post subject:

郭思远 wrote:

此诗好在意境幽深。

很高兴认识新朋友　；））　

给您回好。。。

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Posted: 2007-04-26 20:55:35 Post subject: Re: [原创]　慰楚风

晓松 wrote:

吾兄的诗别具一格，风格独特，喜欢！

谢谢　老朋友，我的创作，还不够严谨。。。

Cool

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Posted: 2007-04-29 20:21:20 Post subject:

有意思,偶在一旁偷着乐!) _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-04-29 23:41:33 Post subject:

勿妄言还等你出手呢；））。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-30 04:47:37 Post subject:

这个偶可真的不敢妄言了) _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-05-01 19:58:39 Post subject:

你的新头像　很漂亮　；））。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-05-01 21:04:39 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

你的新头像　很漂亮　；））

。。

是一树紫藤萝.

))
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Posted: 2007-05-02 06:20:23 Post subject:

枫痴有意思

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Posted: 2007-05-02 10:02:53 Post subject:

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许蔚 wrote:

枫痴有意思

给许蔚回好；）

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