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Posted: 2013-06-06 09:50:41 Post subject: 百味金樽

百味金樽文 / 一无评人当日后酌情孔方前只只金樽举谁不饮忠奸 20100118上午修改 20071212上午写成 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-06 22:08:43 Post subject:

道出人间百相。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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谢黄洋界赐评。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-06-09 00:11:52 Post subject:

墨润筆锋，道出百味！请问这首诗是採用新韵吗？ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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白云闲人 wrote:

墨润筆锋，道出百味！
请问这首诗是採用新韵吗？

谢谢白云闲人赐阅赐评。
这是我白天无诗意，某晚梦中出来的句子。只是自觉顺口而已。请指教啊。
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Posted: 2013-06-11 11:25:58 Post subject:

梦中得诗句，筆锋顺意追 - 好！ _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2013-06-11 13:19:07 Post subject:

引人遐思，意境幽深！

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白云闲人 wrote:

梦中得诗句，筆锋顺意追 - 好！

谢谢朋友鼓励。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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宝塔山人 wrote:

引人遐思，意境幽深！

谢谢朋友光临鼓励。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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