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缺少了什么

水弦
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Posted: 2013-06-05 07:35:18 Post subject: 缺少了什么

缺少了什么生活的海洋浪花朵朵纸条春风杨柳网上花花世界为什么我总是若有所失究竟缺少了什么茶叶香酒也热诗意的日子不同的味觉也没有放弃生活中的梦想生活究竟缺少了什么小园的桃花开的更艳苦菜也比往年越发的多在一条河边奔跑仍然感到心情干涩究竟缺少了什么人在世上最怕孤单痛苦要有条件分解生活更要有人分享欢乐 2013.6.6. _________________ 诗意生存

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2013-06-05 11:02:39 Post subject:

缺恋人？议论偏重。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

山城子
榜眼

Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2013-06-07 13:29:56 Post subject:

小园的桃花开的更艳 ——第二个结构助词应为“得”。 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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