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PostPosted: 2013-06-07 08:01:04    Post subject: 反应(外一首) Reply with quote

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考场上有人回头

掀起一阵目光的风



地沟油案件 查处了

人心里还反射阴影



一句话上车占个座

说明教育的漏洞



洗不净的菜

像残留的梦痕

2013.6.8.

这不仅仅是饮食问题



天上飞的 飞着飞着

就飞进欲望的口中



海里游的 游来游去

就游进死水池



我不是素食主义者

然而我喜欢绿色



我想用水洗净视线

但我还是用眼睛卫生



怎样能躲避隐形的红黄色

管住流通的入口



反正这不是一首诗能解决的

也不仅仅是饮食的问题

2013.6.8.
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PostPosted: 2013-06-07 09:34:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

“考场上有人回头

掀起一阵目光的风 ”

惊心动魄的时刻。
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PostPosted: 2013-06-07 10:21:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

我不是素食主义者
然而我喜欢绿色

问好
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PostPosted: 2013-06-16 09:22:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢老朋友来临帖
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PostPosted: 2013-06-16 17:49:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

反正这不是一首诗能解决的

也不仅仅是饮食的问题
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