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一阵清风
掀动行者的衣襟
一缕日光
温暖冷冷的身心
激流里的鱼儿
轻轻吻啄忘情弄潮人
呓语时
梦里有片五彩霞云
隔山隔水
连着一双深情的眼睛
经年累月
揪紧着那颗如一的心
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。
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经年累月
揪紧着那颗如一的心
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呓语时
梦里有片五彩霞云
隔山隔水
连着一双深情的眼睛
经年累月
揪紧着那颗如一的心
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及物很细致
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