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海上修改稿

水弦
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Posted: 2013-05-28 09:11:20 Post subject: 海上修改稿

海上海上无风三尺浪有风施虐在海上不稳定的海面几个词在摇撼海疆海藻和鱼类蒙受灾难陆地在海中摇荡海水是咸的思想渗出血色躲不过的海腥味呛人历史发出呼喊海面不平静了海洋发现紧张硝烟和迷雾并未飘远值得注意风的动向 2013.5.29 _________________ 诗意生存

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-05-28 16:56:43 Post subject:

硝烟和迷雾并未飘远值得注意风的动向学习，顶上问好朋友. _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-05-28 20:02:51 Post subject:

硝烟和迷雾并未飘远值得注意风的动向顶上欣赏，很好的诗文！

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-05-28 21:03:09 Post subject:

海藻和鱼类蒙受灾难陆地在海中摇荡海水是咸的思想渗出血色 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2013-06-01 22:59:57 Post subject:

有些詞句或可斟酌如海面不平静了海洋发现紧张而几个词在摇撼海疆思想渗出血色則有創新

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