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水弦
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Posted: 2013-05-28 07:26:31 Post subject: 海上

海上海上无风三尺浪有风施虐在海上不稳定的海面几个词在摇撼海疆陆地在海中摇荡历史发出呼喊人们看到恶浪在制造紧张风的动向值得注意谁在破坏和平的理想 2013.5.29 _________________ 诗意生存

山城子
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Posted: 2013-05-28 08:39:23 Post subject:

再填些具体意象就更好了！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

水弦
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Posted: 2013-05-28 08:55:02 Post subject:

嗯可是不好操作啊 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2013-05-28 09:08:22 Post subject:

水弦 wrote:

嗯可是不好操作啊

是的——既可让人读出，又不会出现文字责任问题，要巧妙！
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诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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