唐振鹏
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Joined: 26 May 2013
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Location: 中国陕西
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 Posted: 2013-05-26 23:38:29 Post subject: 【西江月.醉后蓬山易到】 |
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醉后蓬山易到，
梦中瑶水常泅。
醒来秋士更悲秋 ：
少壮已成老朽。
白发秋霜竞长，
泪泉弱水争流。
渐无肌脂剩骷髅，
惟与黄花比瘦。
唐振鹏作于辛卯年八月十五日 |
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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| Posted: 2013-05-27 05:36:13 Post subject: |
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| 借用清照句，写出满腔愁。 |
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Daxia
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Joined: 26 Apr 2013
Posts: 163
Location: Mississauga, Canada
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| Posted: 2013-05-28 05:06:48 Post subject: |
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有点儿悲凉了，如果是年轻人还是应该有点朝气为好。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2013-05-28 05:15:27 Post subject: |
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| Daxia wrote: |
| 有点儿悲凉了，如果是年轻人还是应该有点朝气为好。 |
从词中看来是位长辈。 |
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Daxia
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Location: Mississauga, Canada
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| Posted: 2013-05-28 06:46:17 Post subject: |
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也就50后，60后吧。不过唐兄的功底了得，钦佩。问候一声唐老师。
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2013-05-28 20:29:34 Post subject: |
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| 呵呵，白云老师的诗词，看不到悲凉景象。描写秋风落叶，用阶前堆满金钱；描写冬天下雪，则用枝上绽放着雪花。这是个人修为啊！你我都得好好学学。 |
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