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投稿 秋虫鸣叫的地方(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 08:22:55    Post subject: 投稿 秋虫鸣叫的地方(组诗) Reply with quote

秋虫鸣叫的地方(组诗)
雨水
雨水分给乡下
被当作宝贝
节省下来

庄稼院儿的主人很实际
习惯用盆盆桶桶
去亲近雨水的用途

雨水很肥
洗得出淳朴的民风
而乡下的日子
长势良好

倾听

倾听秋虫鸣叫的诗意
像一种叮咛
深入淳朴的心肠
从秋虫鸣叫的乡情里
一路走来
我的诗
沾满晶莹的思想

多少年来
我早已熟稔了炊烟
缠络的宁静与安详
因为枕着秋虫的鸣音
就像回到故乡的
身旁

老农

木条架起餐桌
与老伴儿共享
馋了请回一斤肉
奢侈一回

天冷了
他用柴草温暖冬天
累了就躺在大书里
再使起当年的家什

如今他的简朴老了
走路多了一条腿
背负岁月的身躯
亲近泥土
就像为了证明
一个多年提倡的词语

守着不缺不少的晚年
将菜根嚼得有滋有味儿
真叫人羡慕不已

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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 09:24:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

“如今他的简朴老了
走路多了一条腿
背负岁月的身躯
亲近泥土 ”

简朴,实在。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-23 13:00:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢点评
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PostPosted: 2013-05-27 08:35:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢这种诗,永远的乡情。
诗中评价的语气很棒啊~!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-28 07:27:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

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