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kokho
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Posted: 2007-04-20 12:17:26 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

看不到动画

----忽然，感到很累，很累……那一朵小菊花在哪里？
记得小时候，夏天的傍晚，常常提着个菜篮子去菜园摘菜。最喜欢在那夕阳的余辉中向南远眺，远方的青山如黛，给少年的我无限的向往。只是那时的我只知道那山名叫庐山，却不知道陶潜，不知道东篱……我想，也许是因为采菊、摘菜的截然不同，所以才注定了我无法超脱这俗世！
——那一朵小菊花在哪里？我无心追寻，无心向往……

等一等　６ＭＢ的文件　；））

荷梦　看看第二版本。。。

小菊花　一直都在我心里　：））

Cool

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荷梦
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Posted: 2007-04-20 20:25:10 Post subject:

欣赏到了，画面很美。歌也听到了，很喜欢听这歌。 ——近些时总有很疲倦的感觉，应该是一种对人生，对生活的悲观情绪在作怪（也许，它很早就潜在着吧）！小菊花，意味着内心的宁静与恬淡，但我再也看不到它了。

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Posted: 2007-04-21 22:13:42 Post subject:

看到了,应该说是个电子书册吧,该把你的作品慢满都收录进来~很漂亮! 提个小小建议,画面过浓,影响文字效果,可以再清爽点~

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Posted: 2007-04-22 11:10:33 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

欣赏到了，画面很美。歌也听到了，很喜欢听这歌。

——近些时总有很疲倦的感觉，应该是一种对人生，对生活的悲观情绪在作怪（也许，它很早就潜在着吧）！
小菊花，意味着内心的宁静与恬淡，但我再也看不到它了。

人生　在于心境　；））

Cool

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kokho
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Posted: 2007-04-22 11:11:34 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

看到了,应该说是个电子书册吧,该把你的作品慢满都收录进来~很漂亮!
提个小小建议,画面过浓,影响文字效果,可以再清爽点~ Very Happy

谢谢　半溪明月　的意见　；））

这是朋友帮我做的。。。

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Posted: 2007-04-22 18:46:19 Post subject:

欣赏，差点没弄明白怎么用鼠标翻页，点了半天。

荷梦
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Posted: 2007-04-23 06:05:46 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

荷梦 wrote:

人生　在于心境　；））

Cool

对我而言，人生在于情绪呢，说也奇怪，虽然窗外飘着细雨，但今天的心情竟然莫名其妙地好起来了。呵呵，你不会笑我情绪多变吧？

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Posted: 2007-04-23 08:46:15 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

对我而言，人生在于情绪呢，说也奇怪，虽然窗外飘着细雨，但今天的心情竟然莫名其妙地好起来了。呵呵，你不会笑我情绪多变吧？

以后多放音乐给你听；）

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荷梦
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Posted: 2007-04-25 01:54:46 Post subject:

呵呵，我听着。。。。。。

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Posted: 2007-04-25 08:13:05 Post subject:

kino wrote:

欣赏，差点没弄明白怎么用鼠标翻页，点了半天。 Very Happy

谢谢品读　；）

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Posted: 2007-08-29 22:36:07 Post subject:

真是禅意盎然，远握。

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Posted: 2007-08-30 04:55:11 Post subject:

没看到图。短诗很灵秀``。 _________________ 有一个位置，我从来都没有找到。

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Posted: 2007-08-30 22:56:08 Post subject:

给新华和黑牙回好：）。。图是　ｆｌａｓｈ　动画，　需要时间下载。。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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