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鸟儿问道

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Posted: 2013-05-09 09:26:59 Post subject: 鸟儿问道

鸟儿问道文 / 一无一只小鸟疲惫地落在我肩，问寻飞往森林的路它依靠着我的脖颈，等了很久很久 2011－03－22上午修改 2011－03－21 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-05-09 09:33:47 Post subject:

是的!对于小鸟，真是不好回答。精巧的小诗！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-05-09 09:41:40 Post subject: 谢谢山城子朋友

山城子 wrote:

是的!对于小鸟，真是不好回答。精巧的小诗！！

谢谢朋友提读和鼓励。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2013-05-13 09:47:06 Post subject:

既写实，也有画外之音的含义。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2013-05-13 14:38:58 Post subject: 谢谢【William Zhou周道模】

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

既写实，也有画外之音的含义。

谢谢William Zhou周道模朋友提读和鼓励！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-05-13 18:33:27 Post subject:

欣赏，学习

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Posted: 2013-05-14 08:09:34 Post subject:

很可爱的小鸟 _________________ 诗意生存

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Posted: 2013-05-15 08:54:42 Post subject: 谢谢chensiqi

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欣赏，学习

谢谢！请批评指导。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-05-15 08:55:51 Post subject: 谢谢水弦

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很可爱的小鸟

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Posted: 2013-05-15 15:26:30 Post subject:

人是鸟的朋友

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Posted: 2013-05-16 09:39:15 Post subject: 谢谢春山流岚

春山流岚 wrote:

人是鸟的朋友

谢谢朋友。
让我们与鸟儿和平共处。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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