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麻雀(外一首)

梅树林
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Posted: 2013-05-11 16:11:20 Post subject: 麻雀(外一首)

麻雀(外一首) 梅树林四五只麻雀站在同一根树枝上随风晃动随风晃动我不满它们悠哉游哉享受的样子我故意咳了一声飞走了一只我又咳了一声飞走了一只之后我放弃了这个游戏但它们还是一一飞走了飞去了麻雀空着的树枝也不摆动了但我的心里却空洞洞的 2013.3.10一一3.22 致若荷影子若你遇上荷你就遇上了一个女子这不需局限在七月七月是荷，最妖娆的季节你会有着吟诵或歌唱的冲动遇上荷，心情自然生起清风更让你回眸之瞬，见一支小令依然水边，独自青葱虽然你的遐思，顾盼水中但偶然有份淡绿，就让你怀抱着浅红 2013.3.5

chenrunmin
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Posted: 2013-05-11 20:21:43 Post subject:

虽然你的遐思，顾盼水中但偶然有份淡绿，就让你怀抱着浅红 _________________ 一个来自南京，普通大众中的人。

李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-05-11 20:39:01 Post subject:

飞去了麻雀空着的树枝也不摆动了但我的心里却空洞洞的欣赏好诗！

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2013-05-12 08:52:25 Post subject:

说不出怎样，难以说出，不过，这新鲜让我兴奋。问好朋友，多多贴一些来。另外，为什么不让我们知道你是哪儿人呢？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

梅树林
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Posted: 2013-05-12 13:27:51 Post subject:

感谢各位关注！ _________________ 做简单的人，写些简单的诗，过简单的生活！

童话
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Posted: 2013-05-12 17:06:26 Post subject:

欣赏《麻雀》，一种似曾相识的心情。 _________________ 博客地址：http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/3326663842

梅树林
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Posted: 2013-05-13 13:16:39 Post subject:

童话 wrote:

欣赏《麻雀》，一种似曾相识的心情。

谢谢童话！
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做简单的人，写些简单的诗，过简单的生活！

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