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[原创]　寄秋蔷

kokho
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Posted: 2007-04-24 10:42:31 Post subject: [原创]　寄秋蔷

寄秋蔷 .　　　　kokho 夜雨催风月不争滴答无语枕边冷未忌天明花叶数她红我绿春夏更 . _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-04-24 19:42:05 Post subject:

似入禅境

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Posted: 2007-04-24 23:19:23 Post subject:

有宁静之意。

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Posted: 2007-04-25 08:10:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

似入禅境

手机创作　贻笑大方　；））

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Posted: 2007-04-25 08:11:04 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

有宁静之意。

谢谢　莹雪　的抬爱　；）

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Posted: 2007-04-29 20:16:23 Post subject:

复KOKHO 红销翠减春更夏巴山蜀水满目画更待他日君归踏漫卷秋雨笑语花 _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-04-29 23:42:59 Post subject:

勿妄言 wrote:

复KOKHO

红销翠减春更夏

巴山蜀水满目画

更待他日君归踏

漫卷秋雨笑语花

谢谢勿妄言，一定会到成都拜访；）

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Posted: 2007-04-30 04:42:47 Post subject:

代表成都人们欢迎KOKHO的视察! _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-05-01 20:00:04 Post subject:

不敢，很希望去看看　三星堆　金沙遗迹。。。：））当然　还要拜会　秋蔷　。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-05-03 04:25:46 Post subject:

三星堆离偶家很近呢，届时弟可为兄做导游哦：）） _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-05-03 04:37:21 Post subject:

好诗。但说不上是格律诗。 _________________ 我愿意在这里结交更多的朋友，共同切磋学问，共同得以提高。希望大家多帮助我！谢谢！

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Posted: 2007-05-03 09:42:17 Post subject:

水无常态,诗无定式,只要将笔者的情感及诗的意境表达出来,亦无不可. _________________ 一只秋天里的风铃，尽情的感受风的吹拂。摇曳中，让风有了色彩，有了声音，更有了自己的形象；

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Posted: 2007-05-07 23:12:23 Post subject:

勿妄言 wrote:

三星堆离偶家很近呢，届时弟可为兄做导游哦：））

谢谢。。

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Posted: 2007-05-07 23:13:16 Post subject:

勿妄言 wrote:

水无常态,诗无定式,只要将笔者的情感及诗的意境表达出来,亦无不可.

那位朋友　说得对，打油就是大油

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