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Posted: 2013-05-08 04:04:19 Post subject: 意淫

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Posted: 2013-05-08 09:58:11 Post subject:

有波德莱尔的味道啊？特色些，勇敢些！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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Posted: 2013-05-08 10:45:04 Post subject:

就像10首微型诗！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-05-08 11:01:34 Post subject:

William Zhou周道模 wrote:

有波德莱尔的味道啊？特色些，勇敢些！

周兄见多识广，多谢高评厚爱。
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Posted: 2013-05-08 11:14:47 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

就像10首微型诗！！

山城子老师高见。
拆开，是独立的微型诗歌，组装在一起，就是完整的一首。
司马问好
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枫桥夜泊
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Posted: 2013-05-08 20:17:02 Post subject:

学习，问好！ _________________ 诗歌可以使人理性，时时不忘作人良知。

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Posted: 2013-05-11 02:40:02 Post subject:

枫桥夜泊 wrote:

学习，问好！

枫桥客气。多谢你光临阅读。

司马问好
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Posted: 2013-05-11 02:40:17 Post subject:

枫桥夜泊 wrote:

学习，问好！

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Posted: 2013-05-12 08:45:40 Post subject:

司马兄意淫的很有水平。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

一无
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Posted: 2013-05-12 08:51:10 Post subject:

学习。新颖。有内涵。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-05-14 14:41:22 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

司马兄意淫的很有水平。

多谢浪兄鼓励，还多请浪兄指点。
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Posted: 2013-05-14 14:45:16 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

学习。新颖。有内涵。

多谢光临。谢谢你夸奖了。远握！
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Posted: 2013-05-14 16:03:46 Post subject:

改动两句，再请各位诗友点评。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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