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紫灵之舞
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PostPosted: 2013-05-06 12:28:44    Post subject: 紫灵之舞 Reply with quote

紫灵之舞

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紫色的精灵在深情的横笛上执着舞着 不知疲倦
悠扬的魂香弥漫了山川
弥漫了田野
也弥漫了沼泽

迷人而神秘的身姿
在快乐的王国里构筑着孤独的城堡
等待 爱的驾临
乘坐七彩的光车奔赴玫瑰的故乡
高处传来长老的叮咛

薰衣草就是你的化身
用生命绽放美丽
用优雅安抚心灵
用月痕等待浪漫的羽翼丰满
剪碎夜空的冷漠
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PostPosted: 2013-05-06 14:53:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

有轻飘之感!
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PostPosted: 2013-05-08 13:44:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

传统的内核和现代派的语言味道。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-09 19:13:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
有轻飘之感!


多谢 老师临帖点评 问好 !
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