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山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2013-05-01 09:44:51 Post subject: 词组(外一首)

词组(外一首) 词组(外一首) 文/ 山城子参加工作——在五月加入组织——在五月这两个动宾式词组注定了我今生很红火的颜色航空工业——五月的颜色热血青年——五月的颜色这两个偏正式词组留下了我今生最美好的回忆时过境迁到初中课本上词组改名为短语但我的人生本色没有改我很本色的故事还在继续 2013-5-2于黔 <深绿的下午> 这是黔中的山石小路走累了就坐到阳光制造的浓荫里我们已经没有了前行的目标只是让视线潜入松风拂过那深深的绿不小心就到了半个世纪之前辽西的桃李花开之季说我们都有一双劳动的手怕什么一贫如洗于是就开始相亲相依哈，这个下午在这远离初恋的和新婚的大山里两个人的心情返回了悠远的甜蜜 2013-5-2于黔 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

一无
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Joined: 20 Mar 2013
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Posted: 2013-05-01 10:52:07 Post subject:

“走累了就坐到阳光制造的浓荫里我们已经没有了前行的目标只是让视线潜入松风拂过那深深的绿 ” 能醉人呢！ “在这远离初恋的和新婚的大山里两个人的心情返回了悠远的甜蜜 ” 感人啊！ _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

hepingdao
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Posted: 2013-05-01 11:07:31 Post subject:

比较喜欢后一个 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

李庆贺
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Joined: 22 Feb 2013
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Posted: 2013-05-01 11:29:38 Post subject:

借景抒情，喜欢的叙述！问好！

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2013-05-04 14:22:55 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“走累了就坐到阳光制造的浓荫里
...

谢谢一无！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-05-04 14:23:25 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

比较喜欢后一个

谢谢岛主鼓励！！
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山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2013-05-04 14:23:55 Post subject:

李庆贺 wrote:

借景抒情，喜欢的叙述！问好！

问好李庆贺！！
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姚阳辉
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Joined: 04 Apr 2013
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Posted: 2013-05-04 20:33:04 Post subject:

不小心就到了半个世纪之前辽西的桃李花开之季说我们都有一双劳动的手怕什么一贫如洗于是就开始相亲相依

图书拥百城
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Joined: 28 Feb 2013
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Posted: 2013-05-05 10:15:16 Post subject:

我们都有一双劳动的手怕什么一贫如洗好诗歌，欣赏，学习，问好

李庆贺
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Posted: 2013-05-05 15:24:16 Post subject:

再来学习，顶上——

草一
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Posted: 2013-05-06 07:11:33 Post subject:

来学习问好！ _________________ 凭谁问生命如歌我自朝前越

山城子
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Posted: 2013-05-06 14:56:17 Post subject: i

姚阳辉 wrote:

不小心就到了半个世纪之前
...

谢谢朋友！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-05-06 14:56:42 Post subject:

图书拥百城 wrote:

我们都有一双劳动的手
怕什么一贫如洗

好诗歌，欣赏，学习，问好

谢谢朋友！！
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山城子
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Posted: 2013-05-06 14:57:06 Post subject:

李庆贺 wrote:

再来学习，顶上——

谢谢朋友！！
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