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我收到的学生诗作（６）

陈若祥
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Posted: 2007-04-24 02:19:14 Post subject: 我收到的学生诗作（６）

远洋高三（5）班蒋元庆把最好的一缕夕阳留给我远洋远洋告诉风去追踪那些只在梦里出现过的渴望告诉风再鼓一鼓翅膀不要问目的地迎着海浪，随着涛声远航把最好的一片海域留给我远洋远洋云不是水的家水借云而流浪没有人知道水来自何方只知道浸润的满足遥远的流淌只知道上善若水永恒的渴望把最好的一种愿望留给我远洋远洋前路迢迢，瀚海茫茫乘长风破万里浪让明亮的星星辉映港湾的热望让美丽的月光引导水兵不倦的灵魂放飞远洋的梦想远洋远洋

子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-24 02:27:25 Post subject:

挺直接的抒情！

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-04-24 19:51:40 Post subject:

高三同学写到此程度，可喜可贺。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

上城
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Joined: 15 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-28 11:29:21 Post subject:

把最好的一缕夕阳留给我远洋远洋告诉风去追踪那些只在梦里出现过的渴望告诉风再鼓一鼓翅膀不要问目的地迎着海浪，随着涛声远航把最好的一片海域留给我远洋远洋云不是水的家水借云而流浪没有人知道水来自何方只知道浸润的满足遥远的流淌只知道上善若水永恒的渴望把最好的一种愿望留给我远洋远洋前路迢迢，瀚海茫茫乘长风破万里浪让明亮的星星辉映港湾的热望让美丽的月光引导水兵不倦的灵魂放飞远洋的梦想远洋远洋远洋远洋忘记梦想就人羞愧.美丽轻快的诗! _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

金金
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Posted: 2007-04-29 20:25:46 Post subject:

情是真的，没被污染。加油哦：）关注中问好陈老师，呵呵！！ _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

陈若祥
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Posted: 2007-05-13 07:04:35 Post subject:

谢谢各位的评点！问好子花、司马策风、伤城、金金！元庆的这首诗有很强的张力，抒发了强烈的感情，彰显了炽热的理想． _________________ ¤当树的叶子再次泛绿，繁华 ¤我们欣赏着一部与你我无关的电影 ¤看着春天悄悄地走来 ¤看着春天延伸在我们的脚下 ◆安徽凤鸣诗社◆http://blog.sina.com.cn/fmshishe

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