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撂荒地
桃园郎
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 19:39:56    Post subject: 撂荒地 Reply with quote

撂荒地
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桃园郎
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面对撂荒地
如同看见被抛弃的孩子
苍白无力
残留失血的泪滴
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面对撂荒地
顿感幸福被挖空了根基
杂草密集
茂盛无奈的叹息
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面对撂荒地
多想倾吐被封存的文字
铺开笺纸
不知从哪里下笔
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难道填饱了肚皮就不管地皮
难道当年的哭声还可以充饥
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 21:39:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。
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桃园郎
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PostPosted: 2013-05-04 08:27:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
不错。


感谢!

学习写作,请朋友多多多指点啊!感谢!
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SLIU
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PostPosted: 2013-05-05 19:45:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

面对撂荒地
多想倾吐被封存的文字
铺开笺纸
不知从哪里下笔
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