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沸水中的生命悲歌
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 05:41:39    Post subject: 沸水中的生命悲歌 Reply with quote

沸水中的生命悲歌

(一)
还没有晒足春的阳光
还没有饮够春的晨露
还没有看到自己绽放的花朵
甚至没有听完一首鸟的歌唱
刚过了寒冬的冰冷
刚觉察春季的颜色
青年的生命终结在生机盎然的阳春三月

(二)
这不是秋天的落叶
这不是秋天的采摘
这不是黄甸甸的含笑
那只是绿油油的疼痛
那只是一种翠绿色的终结
那只是一种枯黄色的祭奠
一张张贪得无厌的嘴吞没了无数的生命

(三)
经过杀青去掉部分的体液
经过揉捻失去原来的外型
经过烘焙蒸发必要的水分
反复加工褪却本来的颜色
在改变中坚持 在否定中肯定
在环境中改变 在本质中坚持
在否定中成长 在肯定中前行

(四)
一撮茶被囚禁在壶(杯)里
满怀仇恨从入口望向天空
当你的目光从入口与他们对视
绝望和仇恨让你不寒而憟
是谁把青年的生命葬送
贪欲和享受把一切掩埋

(五)
当沸水冲入溶器之中
又一次被炀得到处翻滚
滚炀的水浸入全部身体
不要无视溶器里的的呐喊与挣扎
绿色的血液从身体里被挤出
卷曲的身体被高温和水慢慢灌胀拉伸
鼻子嗅吸你的气味
嘴巴把血水渐渐包围
舌头不停地品尝每一种味道
三开过后丢弃的全是一无所有的尸体
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PostPosted: 2013-05-03 18:22:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

比较晦涩。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-04 09:31:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢你的指点。
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