影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-28 19:20:10 Post subject: 七绝•柳 |
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七绝•柳
寻梦江湖初照影,垂髫总角少年华。
遇人皆问南山道,祖上曾居陶令家。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-04-29 05:36:45 Post subject: |
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旧作一首和寒水兄:
七绝 咏柳
拂尘潇洒水边仙,笑看人间来往帆。
醉卧春风添绿意,千江尽映翠衣衫。 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-29 18:18:37 Post subject: |
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悠然自态
谢谢诗长赐和 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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chensiqi 童生
Joined: 10 May 2013 Posts: 6
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Posted: 2013-05-10 21:20:34 Post subject: |
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学习中。。。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-11 20:47:44 Post subject: |
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祖上曾居陶令家。好个结句,点明作者的闲散人生。 |
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
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Posted: 2013-05-14 09:05:40 Post subject: |
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祖上曾居陶令家 - 妙用! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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