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我停留在了这儿
上城
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PostPosted: 2013-04-25 20:39:14    Post subject: 我停留在了这儿 Reply with quote

我停留在了这儿
办公室的键盘响起,声声
虫鸣在窗外,草丛多么可爱
一直到路口边
夏日在催着我们

我爱你,静静喊着
我感激这些善良的人
让我和他们一起工作、生活
犹如我们住过的那些屋室
读书的时光

饭后正适合散步,沿着小路
这儿四季如春,雨后倍感清新
你这时正在生病,一个人

前些日,我还在海边
巨浪淹过我无事的躯体
我浮在浪涛里,不知该想着什么
望着茫茫的深处,海岸正远
而你这时正难过着
在城市边远的一角


10时23分44秒 2013/4/17
8时44分26秒 4/26/2013于深圳南山
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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-04-26 02:44:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

特殊的日子,特殊的时间,记载着一种特殊的感觉
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金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2013-04-29 13:47:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

很棒,看了你的诗集,我想你写具体的事物是专长,这首气质够,其实你可以写更具体的细节!!

写的时间很有意思啊“)!! blue moon
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李庆贺
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Joined: 22 Feb 2013
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PostPosted: 2013-04-30 01:35:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

海岸正远
而你这时正难过着
在城市边远的一角


学习,发散思维,集中表现诗意,问好!
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