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来到寺院
郑士渊
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PostPosted: 2013-04-27 18:22:01    Post subject: 来到寺院 Reply with quote
世间的嘈杂、争吵、枪炮声
在寺门口嘎然止步，阿弥陀佛！

让燥动的心停止摇摆让所有的理论静下来
听风悄悄行走，不惊动默念佛经的香火

听雨滴穿岩石，启动我们意念的力量
推动这个社会继续前进

听雪悄悄降落，抹去世间所有不平
制造一个圣洁的世界

最后，不要问山与海哪个重要
把内心放平，无私心杂念就是一种静

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白水
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PostPosted: 2013-04-27 19:26:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
不要问山与海哪个重要
把内心放平，静就是一个平衡点
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风动
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PostPosted: 2013-04-27 21:21:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
是心是佛，心静佛静。
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郑士渊
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PostPosted: 2013-04-28 11:39:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢楼上俩位诗兄评点！
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2013-04-28 23:13:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
听雨滴穿岩石，启动意念的力量
推动这个世界继续前进

听雪悄悄降落，抹去世间所有不平
制造一个圣洁的世界

去掉这２节，就完美了。
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郑士渊
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PostPosted: 2013-04-29 11:34:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢杯兄批！
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