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《厌倦》外一首
拈花汉
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PostPosted: 2013-04-26 10:50:48    Post subject: 《厌倦》外一首 Reply with quote

《厌倦》

那些衣物厌倦了
总被同一个人穿戴
同样的体温,汗味,水洗
以及没完没了的缝补的故事

它不知
那些纽扣也早已厌倦了
一个扣眼的牢狱和
接二连三的穿肤之痛

它不知
那些后来的补丁
一个比一个更危险

《远方》

从没去过远方
许多人的远方
骆驼和航船不可能到达
还有女人,还有孩子
还有数不清的日夜的黑白

那些自己和自己最初的约定
渐渐只有一个人和谎言
——了然于胸

远方依旧很远
在红高粱52度的世界里
在数不清的裂开的伤口中
很多人的远方面目全非

从没去过远方
远方是否还很远
有人在路上告诉我
这仅仅和脚步有关
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PostPosted: 2013-04-26 11:49:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

拈生活之花,流心底之意!
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拈花汉
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PostPosted: 2013-04-26 13:32:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
拈生活之花,流心底之意!
问好老师 多多交流
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PostPosted: 2013-04-28 11:42:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-28 23:10:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

特别推荐一下。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-29 14:45:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

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不错!
谢谢诗友欣赏 问好
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PostPosted: 2013-04-29 14:45:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
特别推荐一下。
问好诗友 谢谢
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 08:41:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

它不知
那些后来的补丁
一个比一个更危险

通俗而幽默Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 08:53:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
它不知
那些后来的补丁
一个比一个更危险

通俗而幽默Very Happy
问好诗友 谢谢欣赏 五一快乐
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 12:35:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

那些自己和自己最初的约定
渐渐只有一个人和谎言
——了然于胸

这几句好。
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PostPosted: 2013-05-01 14:56:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

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那些自己和自己最初的约定
...
谢谢诗友欣赏 五一快乐
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