风动 秀才
Joined: 15 Dec 2006 Posts: 290
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Posted: 2013-04-27 21:29:59 Post subject: 《无始无终》 |
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《无始无终》
双门彻开
两头空明
我思
故我在
无形的腔壁
与星辰万象相对
蠕动
无始
无终
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李庆贺 秀才
Joined: 22 Feb 2013 Posts: 180
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Posted: 2013-04-28 00:07:51 Post subject: |
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寥寥数语,道出了一种生活的感悟,深刻、灵动的诗文!学习 |
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hepingdao Site Admin

Joined: 25 May 2006 Posts: 8106
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Posted: 2013-04-28 01:08:50 Post subject: |
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前两节就够
灵动了 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-28 01:19:23 Post subject: |
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通透。 问好周末 |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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风墙 秀才
Joined: 11 Feb 2013 Posts: 126 Location: 中国安徽 风墙Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-28 11:02:13 Post subject: |
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哲理!学习! _________________ 墙漏风了 |
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枫桥夜泊 童生
Joined: 18 Mar 2013 Posts: 45
枫桥夜泊Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-28 11:22:15 Post subject: |
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简洁。哲思。 _________________ 诗歌可以使人理性,时时不忘作人良知。 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2013-04-28 18:03:37 Post subject: |
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古典味道的哲思!! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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杯中冲浪 进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006 Posts: 2891 Location: 中国 杯中冲浪Collection |
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鸟歌 童生
Joined: 09 Mar 2013 Posts: 24 Location: 美国 鸟歌Collection |
Posted: 2013-05-01 12:38:29 Post subject: |
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有强烈的张力和对称感。好诗。 _________________ 我是风,一阵随意的风。 |
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