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《忆秦娥 . 雅安地震》

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-04-23 23:58:32 Post subject: 《忆秦娥 . 雅安地震》

《忆秦娥 . 雅安地震》 ----以此赠与万千仍在当地救灾的军民和在地震中死难的同胞川中咽，山崩地动灾情烈。灾情烈，芦山房毁，雅安流血。环球惊动多关切，万千军民心同热。心同热，救灾忘我，晨昏无别。 2013/4/24 《忆秦娥》用迫切的入声韵，最适合表达紧急的情境。

白水
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Posted: 2013-04-24 05:18:23 Post subject:

心系灾区

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-04-24 05:37:05 Post subject:

秋叶兄大作及时。龙门断裂带，四川多震灾。危房频频见，何处诉悲哀？

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Posted: 2013-04-24 07:32:32 Post subject:

秋叶兄悲天悯人之作，感人至深！何处诉悲哀？众生唯天垂。义心被挪用，善款救谁哉？据电台称：汶川地震香港捐款甚多，这次民意调查仅百分之6肯捐。

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Posted: 2013-04-24 07:40:40 Post subject:

雅安地震灾情烈，我与秋叶同心热。词牌选得好，词情急迫。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2013-04-25 02:18:14 Post subject:

词情热切。赏学！

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-04-25 13:57:24 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

心系灾区

环球惊动多关切

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:00:17 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

秋叶兄大作及时。

龙门断裂带，四川多震灾。危房频频见，何处诉悲哀？

听说这次的烈度是9级，破坏力很大啊。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:07:02 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

秋叶兄悲天悯人之作，感人至深！
...

谢谢笑聊兄赏读，我记得香港同胞历来是很热情支持国内的救灾的，这次有人提出捐款是否专用的问题。

谷雨文学家园
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:10:26 Post subject:

欣赏，遥祝朋友快乐，雅安人民平安....

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:20:48 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

雅安地震灾情烈，我与秋叶同心热。
词牌选得好，词情急迫。

谢谢黄老师的同心热，四川对您应是最有感情的。
“忆秦娥”的入声韵是最能表达这样的情景，特别是用有入声韵的方言去读。

另外，“晨”字处应为仄声，我想了好久，没有找到可替代的字，不能因律害意，就先用了，不知您有何高见，望赐教。

秋叶
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Posted: 2013-04-25 14:25:27 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

词情热切。赏学！

谢谢冰清老师赏读，近来我对词更有兴趣，每晚睡前必读，受益不浅，有空定向您请教。

笑聊
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Posted: 2013-04-25 19:31:42 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

秋叶兄悲天悯人之作，感人至深！
...

谢谢笑聊兄赏读，我记得香港同胞历来是很热情支持国内的救灾的，这次有人提出捐款是否专用的问题。

秋叶兄提出的问题正是香港人民的心声。

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