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我见到大海了
陇上雪
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PostPosted: 2013-04-17 21:30:20    Post subject: 我见到大海了 Reply with quote

无数次梦见过大海
当我苏醒,挂在眼角的一滴泪
还有海的咸味

当我真的去了青岛
站在碧绿的黄海边
我却显得茫然无措
而我所能做的,一些小孩子正在做——
他们跟随大人
乘坐游轮,去感受海浪的起伏
在浅水湾脱掉鞋袜
用脚掌感受一下那些褐色礁石的锋利
和海水的冰冷
嗅嗅海风的腥味 然后
随人流来到海底世界
似乎进入大海的内部
但只能隔着一层玻璃
看看斑斓的珊瑚和游动的各种鱼群
无法缩短与大海之间的距离

回到黄土高原的家乡
我对朋友们说,我见到大海了
语气有点自豪 但是
我对神秘的大海仍然一无所知
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PostPosted: 2013-04-18 09:55:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢纪实的感受!
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一无
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PostPosted: 2013-04-18 10:02:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏。
“我对朋友们,我见到大海了 ”是否少键入一字?
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PostPosted: 2013-04-22 12:22:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

回到黄土高原的家乡
我对朋友们说,我见到大海了
语气有点自豪 但是
我对神秘的大海仍然一无所知

欣赏问候!
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