| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-20 21:05:32    Post subject: 七律•春日随笔(新韵) |   |  
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				| 七律•春日随笔(新韵) 寒水初沉醽醁杯,东风戏谑往西吹。
 无边鹤影乘云去,有信莺声带雨回。
 十里樱桃交赤爱,千株杨柳踏青归。
 丝丝日日同心手,入世凭栏抚道辉。
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-21 00:37:00    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 寒水随心吟,高擎醽醁杯。 特喜二,三联。
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		| qinghongh 榜眼
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-21 05:33:30    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 无边鹤影乘云去,有信莺声带雨回。 
 好联。
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		| 笑聊 探花
 
 
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-21 18:26:30    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 同意楼上师友的观点。欣赏颌联。 |  | 
	
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		| 影沉寒水 举人
 
  
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				|  Posted: 2013-04-21 19:25:23    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 谢谢三位临读。 _________________
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