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七律•春日随笔(新韵)
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PostPosted: 2013-04-20 21:05:32    Post subject: 七律•春日随笔(新韵) Reply with quote

七律•春日随笔(新韵)
寒水初沉醽醁杯,东风戏谑往西吹。
无边鹤影乘云去,有信莺声带雨回。
十里樱桃交赤爱,千株杨柳踏青归。
丝丝日日同心手,入世凭栏抚道辉。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-21 00:37:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

寒水随心吟,高擎醽醁杯。
特喜二,三联。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-21 05:33:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

无边鹤影乘云去,有信莺声带雨回。

好联。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-21 18:26:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

同意楼上师友的观点。欣赏颌联。
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PostPosted: 2013-04-21 19:25:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢三位临读。
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