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明天
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PostPosted: 2013-04-17 17:26:39    Post subject: 明天 Reply with quote

夸父追日。我
在一截生命里追赶明天
明天远远地站在时间之外
羞涩,像待嫁的少女

时针慢腾腾地爬行,赶不上
时代的节奏
秒针咔嚓嚓的脚步,提高了
钟表的警觉

深居简出的明天比明年还要遥远
其实像北斗或者天狼星
熟悉又陌生
星相大师也无法准确占卜或预知

梦想的明天一直很美好
到处都是面包、果子、花环和女人
像一本翻乱了的线装书,我
一页页艰难地穿过一粒粒文字

放弃夸父放弃垂暮的夕阳
我在一滴晨露里静静地守候
即将临盆的朝阳,划亮
夜空的第一道霞光泛白的潮红
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PostPosted: 2013-04-17 19:20:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.
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姚阳辉
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PostPosted: 2013-04-18 14:56:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

chenrunmin wrote:
有意境,有感觉,欣赏,学习,问好.
谢谢点评!问好!
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PostPosted: 2013-04-20 09:58:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好明天。欣赏。
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