特父
童生
Joined: 28 Feb 2013
Posts: 72
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 Posted: 2013-04-15 10:39:41 Post subject: 水性 |
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水性
□中国重庆 特父
我用那枚石子
在平静宽阔的河面
划出晶莹珠链的水漂
划亮内心的闪电
那枚石子的去处
潜伏河床 或是随波逐流
只有水一清二楚
潜伏或是随波逐流
都无法改变其洗刷为沙的命运
最终被柔情消融
成为水的韧性
我从那枚石子想到涉事处境的人
想到世界的水性 |
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山城子
榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
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| Posted: 2013-04-16 14:13:06 Post subject: |
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耐人寻味！！
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杯中冲浪
进士出身
Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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博弈
榜眼
Joined: 21 Dec 2006
Posts: 4381
Location: SFO
博弈Collection |
| Posted: 2013-04-17 00:14:37 Post subject: |
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有創意, 可再精簡.
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特父
童生
Joined: 28 Feb 2013
Posts: 72
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| Posted: 2013-04-17 10:23:17 Post subject: |
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谢谢！问好！ |
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特父
童生
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| Posted: 2013-04-17 10:23:49 Post subject: |
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谢鼓励！敬茶！ |
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特父
童生
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| Posted: 2013-04-17 10:28:01 Post subject: |
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谢谢！问安！ |
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